Broken Rain: Secrets of the Night Killer / Chapter 4: The Profiler's Last Theory
Broken Rain: Secrets of the Night Killer

Broken Rain: Secrets of the Night Killer

Author: Malik Williams


Chapter 4: The Profiler's Last Theory

For a year, nothing. The higher-ups took it seriously. Several teams got involved, and our working theory finally sharpened.

The FBI sent in a behavioral analyst. We re-interviewed witnesses, re-tested evidence. But the leads were stale, and hope was running thin. Profiles don’t catch knives. Still, something shifted—like we were finally circling the truth.

A criminal profiler from the state task force, Detective Celeste Morales, was the first to propose a new theory. Of all the cases, the second and fifth were the most irregular. She started with the fifth, discovering the missing piece from the high school girl was the area of the fatal wound—the same as the male victim. So, the missing piece was likely to cover up that left-to-right slash. A second forensic exam confirmed the force of the left-handed wounds matched the other bodies. The second case was then included in the serial killings. Pin-in-the-map moment.

Morales was sharp—one of those people who could see patterns in chaos. She pinned photos to the wall, traced the wounds, connected the dots nobody else saw. She didn’t smile much. She was the first to convince me we weren't crazy to think the cases were linked.

The conclusion: the killer staged a left-handed murder scene to throw us off, making us hunt for a lefty and giving himself an out. But since the second victim was a man, it was hard to kill him instantly with the left, so the killer used his dominant hand for the fatal blow. All the other wounds were just to mislead us. He flipped us to the wrong hand.

It was a classic misdirection. The killer wanted us chasing our tails, and it worked. Morales's insight felt like a floodlight in a dark room.

This meant the killer was ambidextrous, highly intelligent, and a master of disguise—or at least a chameleon. As for killing women, it was likely because of emotional trauma—hatred of women. A rainy night was a key trigger, probably tied to a traumatic memory. And the killer hadn’t struck for over a year, probably because his emotions had stabilized.

Morales even speculated about the killer's childhood, the possibility of abuse or betrayal. She said, "People don't become monsters overnight. The rain just brings out what's already inside."

Her reasoning made sense, and the best proof was—she died…

We found her body on a rain-soaked morning, the hotel room door cracked open. The air was heavy with formalin and fear.

Detective Morales was murdered on a rainy night not long after her theory. The killer hung her body in her hotel room, with a full police uniform laid out on the table. It shook everyone. Compared to private homes, it's much harder to kill someone in a hotel unnoticed. But she died in her room, and no one saw a thing.

Her badge was placed beside her, almost like a taunt. The uniform was ironed, pristine, as if the killer was mocking our authority.

At noon, housekeeping came to clean and found the scene. The hotel didn’t have cameras in the rooms—privacy laws don’t allow it. So, the time of death was a mystery. The killer had to finish after the police meeting and before morning. But Morales never left her room, and her neighbor was a fellow officer. The theory of an inside job came back strong.

The department turned inward again. We grilled each other, checked logs, re-watched hallway footage until our eyes crossed. The killer had slipped right under our noses. Paranoia settled in like mold.

The case was now considered a silencing and merged with the earlier murders. After repeated reviews, several at the station were implicated, including some higher-ups. The main captain was transferred, and another officer and I—they docked us six months’ pay.

Morale hit rock bottom. The press circled like vultures. Every mistake, every rumor made the front page. The Rainy Night Killer was more than a murderer now—he was a myth, a curse. Folklore with a body count.

That was seven years ago—the last Rainy Night murder. That two-year spree left scars everywhere. After that, I became obsessed with clearing the department’s name. I did find some key leads; this person knew everything about the police. From the first to the last case, the connections were tight.

I spent sleepless nights combing through files, building timelines, interviewing anyone who might know something. I learned the squeak of every file drawer. The more I dug, the more I realized the killer had to be close—someone who knew our routines, our weaknesses.

The first victim was cheating, the second was her lover. Starting with the third, all bodies were found after rainy nights, pointing to a rain trigger. The appearance of the third confirmed the pattern. The fourth and fifth proved the killer had no interest in women. The fifth was to throw suspicion off the police. The sixth was because she got too close to the truth.

It was like watching a chess game played by a grandmaster. Every move had a purpose, every piece sacrificed for the endgame. We were always a move behind. I started to see the logic, the cold calculation behind each killing.

All the victims being connected meant the killer’s identity was tied to the department. Based on all the evidence, I finally found a suspect. He was almost my build, and I saw him in an alley near the station. His yellow raincoat stood out—a weird choice for a killer. But he still attacked a girl, went for her carotid with his left hand. The girl was holding her umbrella with her right, so the knife hit it, slicing off her fingers. She screamed, and I happened to be nearby, but the killer moved fast and vanished down the alley.

That yellow raincoat haunted my dreams. I chased him, breath burning in my lungs, but he slipped away like always. I still hear that scream.

That was the only time I saw the killer. The department blamed me for not catching him. The idea of a killer among us became a shadow over everyone. After that, I lost hope and gradually left the force for therapy… Not that it fixed anything.

I spent months in a fog—therapy sessions, prescription bottles, the slow erosion of my confidence. The killer had stolen more than lives; he'd taken my future.

The Rainy Night Killer was silent for seven years, and the investigation stalled. But one thing was clear: the killer knew anatomy; every dismemberment was methodical. No bones hacked—tendons always cut with surgical precision.

The coroner called the cuts "textbook." By someone who studied. It was as if the killer had studied anatomy, maybe even practiced on cadavers. We checked local medical schools, morgues, anyone with surgical training. But again, nothing stuck.

As we dug deeper, we found something. In the first case, someone knew the victim’s boyfriend. It took years because the person who knew him was the latest victim—a distant niece, second-cousin range, of the first victim, who’d met the boyfriend nine years ago. She’d gone off to college and hadn’t contacted anyone for years. Her family hid the connection, afraid of getting involved. Nine years later, almost forgotten, she mentioned it during a family visit.

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