Secrets Under the City Lights / Chapter 8: Suspects and Surveillance
Secrets Under the City Lights

Secrets Under the City Lights

Author: Corey Villarreal MD


Chapter 8: Suspects and Surveillance

I shared my theory with Marissa. She shook her head emphatically.

She insisted, “No way. My friends would never do something like that. I don’t even have a boyfriend. My roommates are all good people.”

She insisted she had few friends, no boyfriend, and only talked to teachers and her roommates—all of whom were good people, she said.

I wanted to believe her, but I’d seen too much to trust anyone blindly. I told her gently, “Sometimes the people closest to us are the ones who hurt us most.”

I felt sorry for her innocence. For adults, it’s second nature not to truly trust others. You always have to watch your back, even with friends and family.

I remembered my mom’s advice: “Don’t let your guard down, Eddie. Not for anyone.” I wondered if Marissa had ever been warned like that.

Though everyone around Marissa was a suspect, her roommates seemed the most likely.

I made a mental list—names, majors, social media handles. I’d dig deeper, no matter how uncomfortable it got.

Wherever there are women, there’s drama. Maybe she’d unknowingly offended them and suffered this cruel revenge.

I tried not to stereotype, but I’d seen enough dorm drama to know that grudges could get ugly. Still, this was something else entirely.

I decided to investigate my own way.

I spent the night researching surveillance gear, reading up on privacy laws, and figuring out how to get the info without tipping anyone off.

I bought a modified wireless router and gave it to Marissa, telling her to swap it with the old one in her dorm.

I explained, “Just say the old one broke. This new one will work better—and I’ll be able to monitor the network for anything weird.”

"Just say the dorm router broke, so you replaced it. This one can capture data packets and will send me all the messages and browsing history from the Wi-Fi. If your roommates say anything suspicious, I’ll know."

I tried to make it sound like a high-tech security upgrade, not a spy tool. She hesitated, but finally agreed.

Marissa was hesitant about spying on them, but did as I asked.

She texted me a photo of the new router plugged in, looking nervous. I promised her it was for her own safety.

So I started monitoring everything in the dorm.

I set up alerts for keywords—ransom, money, Marissa’s name. I watched the data stream in, feeling like a hacker in a movie.

If I hadn’t, I’d never have known—their group chat shattered my worldview.

The messages were brutal—mean girl stuff, but worse. They joked about Marissa behind her back, called her names, wished awful things on her. "Hope she gets cancelled on TikTok," one wrote. "Maybe someone’ll finally teach her a lesson."

Marissa thought of her three roommates as close friends. But in their secret group chat, they called her all kinds of vile names, saying things like “hope she gets her face ruined by hot coffee” or “hope she gets lured away by some creep.”

I screenshot the worst messages, debating whether to show Marissa. I decided against it—for now.

Just reading it made my blood boil.

I wanted to march into that dorm and confront them, but I knew I had to play it smart.

Still, I didn’t find any evidence of big money transfers or suspicious conversations. They didn’t seem involved in the kidnapping.

I checked Venmo, PayPal, even crypto wallets. Nothing out of the ordinary. Just gossip and petty complaints.

But one thing caught my attention: all three were playing a mobile game called “Old Gods.”

They messaged about it constantly—sharing codes, bragging about high scores. I’d never heard of it before.

Funny thing—I’d seen that game on my boss’s phone too.

It was a weird coincidence. I made a note to look into it later.

This chapter is VIP-only. Activate membership to continue.

You may also like

The Guide’s Secret: Sold to the Night Crew
The Guide’s Secret: Sold to the Night Crew
4.6
Ten city strangers, one wild mountain, and a local guide who sells more than adventure. When a secret trade turns the camp into a web of desire and lies, I’m forced to choose between loyalty to my cousin and the truth about what really happens after dark. In the wild, everyone’s hiding something—and some secrets burn hotter than the campfire.
Haunted by the Midnight Maestro
Haunted by the Midnight Maestro
4.6
Derek came to Chicago chasing stardom, but found himself learning forbidden secrets from a phantom voice haunting the theater’s midnight shadows. As his talent grew, so did the chilling suspicion that the price of his gift was more than just sleepless nights—especially when his confession brought the city’s secret ghost-catchers to the stage. Now, with the truth threatening to destroy him, Derek must choose: expose the supernatural bargain or risk becoming the next legend whispered about in the dark.
Ousted Guardian: Betrayed by My Own City
Ousted Guardian: Betrayed by My Own City
4.7
After twenty-four years defending humanity’s last city, Marcus is publicly disgraced when a viral livestream exposes a single mistake. His rivals seize the moment, stripping him of power just as a true demon invasion looms—and the woman he once trusted most reveals she’s risen to take his place. As betrayal closes in and old friends turn enemies, Marcus must decide: fight for the city that cast him out, or let it burn.
Betrayed by the Town, Branded by the Phoenix
Betrayed by the Town, Branded by the Phoenix
4.9
Every night, Aubrey endures unspeakable torment—and every morning, her broken memory erases the pain, leaving her innocent and trusting in a town that profits from her suffering. When she tattoos a phoenix on her back, desperate to hold onto hope, her only ally risks everything to help her expose the truth. But as the townsfolk close in, driven by shame and fear, Aubrey must decide: can she finally break the cycle, or will the town bury its darkest secret forever?
Don't Tell Them You Can See
Don't Tell Them You Can See
4.8
Every time I reveal my secret—my sight returns, and my parents celebrate—I die, waking up trapped in the same nightmare again. The world outside my door is twisted, my family’s smiles too wide, and every neighbor watches with empty, lifeless eyes. If I slip up, they’ll know I’m not blind anymore—and this time, I might not come back.
The Winter Code: Secrets Beneath the Ice
The Winter Code: Secrets Beneath the Ice
4.9
Detective Daniel McAllister races against time as a cryptic message links a children’s song to a global plot threatening humanity’s survival. Caught between duty and doubt, Daniel must unravel the truth behind the mysterious Tristar organization—before the world is plunged into irreversible darkness. Every clue could save or doom them all.
Secrets Buried in the Dorm Room
Secrets Buried in the Dorm Room
4.8
Haunted by a friend's mysterious death, the protagonist digs through school bureaucracy and hidden motives, desperate to uncover what really happened. With every question, suspicion grows—will the truth ever come to light, or will secrets remain buried forever?
My Neighbor’s Wife, My Secret Sin
My Neighbor’s Wife, My Secret Sin
4.8
Through a peephole in my shabby apartment, I watched the beautiful Natalie play the perfect wife by night—and sell her love by day. When I stole her hidden cash to buy my own bride, I set off a chain of betrayal, violence, and murder just a wall away. Years later, with a family of my own, I come face-to-face with the woman whose secrets—and body—were once closer to me than anyone ever knew.
Ghosts of Maple Heights
Ghosts of Maple Heights
4.9
A haunted crime reporter is thrust back into the darkness when a viral murder in Maple Heights unearths buried guilt, lost hope, and a city’s deepest secrets. As he and Detective Marcus Reed dig deeper, they confront a labyrinth of betrayal, a hidden organ trafficking ring, and the shattered lives left in its wake. With every revelation, the protagonist must choose between justice and mercy, knowing that some truths leave scars that never fade.
Falling for 25: The Club Girl's Dare
Falling for 25: The Club Girl's Dare
4.6
He’s a broke college grad, she’s the mysterious club girl called 25—her real name a secret, her world full of danger and midnight bargains. When he risks everything to retrieve her stolen keepsake from Cleveland’s most feared criminal, he’s forced to choose: walk away, or dive headfirst into her world of quick tricks and broken rules. But the closer he gets, the more he realizes—she’s not the only one with something to lose.
Ten Grand to Betray Him Warm
Ten Grand to Betray Him Warm
4.9
He’s the city’s coldest rich kid. I’m the farm boy paid to warm his hands—and maybe his broken heart. The job was supposed to be simple: mop floors, keep secrets, and never ask questions about the mansion’s golden son, Julian. But one midnight meltdown, a forbidden kiss, and a ten-thousand-dollar betrayal later, I’m tangled in a web of family power games, dangerous brothers, and a pop star with bite marks on his neck. Every touch blurs the line between comfort and control. Every secret I keep for Julian is a lie I owe his enemies. When the pills run out and the music stops, will I save him—or destroy him for a paycheck? What’s the price of being the only warmth he trusts?
Forbidden Nights in the Governor’s Mansion
Forbidden Nights in the Governor’s Mansion
4.9
For three years, Alex has survived by pretending to be a man, hiding her true self among the shadows of the governor’s mansion. But when she falls for the governor’s most dangerous companion, secrets ignite into a passion that could destroy them both. One touch could cost her everything—but she’s done pretending not to want him.